Kia ora Shelby, I really enjoyed your animation, it was hilarious. Especially the part when she went to McDonalds, and finally found some food. Maybe next time you could add a bit more detail. In parts such as when she is talking,like using more words and sentences. Other than that it was an amazing animation, keep up the good work. From Paige.
Hi Paige, Thanks for taking the time to read my animation slide, I put Mc Donalds in my slide because I really LIKE my Mc Donalds. The feedback that you gave was honest, next time I'll try and use a bit more detail. Once again thanks for your comment. From Shelby.
Kia ora Shelby,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your animation, it was hilarious. Especially the part when she went to McDonalds, and finally found some food. Maybe next time you could add a bit more detail. In parts such as when she is talking,like using more words and sentences. Other than that it was an amazing animation, keep up the good work.
From Paige.
Hi Paige,
DeleteThanks for taking the time to read my animation slide, I put Mc Donalds in my slide because I really LIKE my Mc Donalds. The feedback that you gave was honest, next time I'll try and use a bit more detail.
Once again thanks for your comment.
From Shelby.